Rate and fix my deck?

All right, get rid of the magical citadel and endymion master. Get rid of one red enchanter, and get rid of two exemplars and add a summoner monk. add in another old vindictive and a crystal seer and two night's end sorcerors. Today, syncro's the name of the game, and if you expect to win any duels with this deck you need to incorperate some tuners and get some syncros. take out nobleman & takeout a royal decree and add in two magicians circles. also add in another defender